在2022年12月24日托福考試當(dāng)中重復(fù)了一道2013年9月21日的雅思寫作真題，是關(guān)于說完美社會(huì)需要什么，下面我們一起來(lái)看看關(guān)于這篇雅思寫作的范文，希望對(duì)備考的同學(xué)們有所幫助！

2022.12.24雅思寫作真題，原題重復(fù)2013年9月21日雅思真題

Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people do to achieve an ideal society? (2022/12/24)

解析與思路

本題首先需要定義什么是完美社會(huì)，在諸多因素中，找出最重要的那個(gè)元素（the most important element）。當(dāng)然，寫作不是做數(shù)學(xué)題，哪個(gè)是最重要的元素并無(wú)唯一正確答案，只要考生能自圓其說就沒有問題。找到這個(gè)最重要的元素后，就可以討論怎樣才能實(shí)現(xiàn)的問題。

完美社會(huì)的因素可能有：物質(zhì)豐富、安全感、歸屬感、人人平等、有上升的機(jī)會(huì)，等等。但我認(rèn)為最為重要的是人人平等。人人平等并不意味著大家財(cái)富、地位絕對(duì)平等，而是指人格平等、機(jī)會(huì)均等。

那么如何實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)一個(gè)人人平等的理想社會(huì)呢？首先是營(yíng)造相互尊重的氛圍；其次是要制定相關(guān)法律，在就業(yè)市場(chǎng)、教育、醫(yī)療等領(lǐng)域確保任何人不被歧視；最后當(dāng)然是要給社會(huì)中每個(gè)人提供實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的機(jī)會(huì)。

網(wǎng)上高分范文

Ever since its appearance，mankind has been trying to build a perfect society, but there has never been a consensus of opinion about what a perfect society would be like.

Ancient Greek thinker Plato once said the ideal society should be governed by philosophers.He may have been right,but a philosopher cannot possibly create an ideal societyin a world ascomplicated astoday's.The most fundamental thing for a perfect society is,of course, that all members are free from poverty, which means the society must be wealthy. At the same time,they should also feel they have been well protected from danger. No society is perfect ifits members cannot enjoy this sense of security.

A sense of belonging is also a cornerstone for a perfect society. Without common values people will not feel they are part of a community,then they will feel lonely and estranged,and eventually become indifferent, or even hostile, to each other
Yet the most important element of an ideal society,I think, is equality among its members.ByequalityI do not mean that everybody should possess the same amount of wealthwhich is not possiblebut that there is no bias against anyone. regardless of his birth race, sex, occupation, and religion.

Howto construct asocietyin which all are equal? I think three steps are essential. In the first place,a general environment must be created in which all people are respected. Secondly laws and rules must be made to ensure that there is no prejudice in job market, education, or medical services,or any other fields whatsoever. Most import of all, a mechanism should be set up so that everyone in the society enjoys equal opportunities to fulfill his or her dreams.