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雅思寫作社會(huì)類話題:變老的影響
時(shí)間:2020-07-03
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Some people think getting old is bad for them in the modern world, while others think older people today live better lives than in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
題目來源:2016年12月17日大陸雅思大作文
題目大意
一些人認(rèn)為在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中,變老對(duì)于他們是不利的,然而其他的人認(rèn)為他們比起過去生活得更好。討論雙方觀點(diǎn)并給出個(gè)人意見。
寫作思路解析
這道題目要求我們討論雙方觀點(diǎn),因此要分別驗(yàn)證兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性。我們可以講雖然變老對(duì)于老人來說確實(shí)有很多的不好處,但是比起過去來說,現(xiàn)在老年人確實(shí)比之前的生活相對(duì)于來說更加容易一些。首先對(duì)于前者的觀點(diǎn)來說,變老確實(shí)有很多不利的影響,比如在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中,人們可能發(fā)現(xiàn)自己會(huì)很難適應(yīng)社會(huì)的變化,比如新的科技的出現(xiàn)對(duì)于老年人來說是比較難接受的,他們會(huì)很難在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)生存;同時(shí)老年人很可能會(huì)比較孤獨(dú),可能自己的子女并沒有陪伴在自己的身邊;另一方的觀點(diǎn)是和過去作對(duì)比,老年人的生活質(zhì)量比起以前有了提升,比如老年人可以享受更好的醫(yī)療保健資源,老年人的壽命也逐漸提高;條件越來越好的養(yǎng)老院也給他們提供了比以往更好的居住條件。最后我個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)是老年人要積極適應(yīng)現(xiàn)代的生活特征,用積極的心態(tài)過好晚年生活。
The aging population nowadays is taking an increasingly large proportion in our society. Some people claim that it is tough for the elderly people to live a decent life in the modern society. Personally, I tend to have a different opinion.
It is true that the senior citizens may face some difficulties in their lives. Firstly, people’s physical condition deteriorates inevitably as time passes by. Hence, they may suffer from various diseases and may lose the ability to support themselves financially and physically. Besides, the advancing technology may cause some difficulties for them since it is hard for them to acquaint themselves with the latest technology. For example, the online payment is pervasive nowadays in our country, but a majority of elderly still use the cash because they are not able to use them very well, which brings troubles in their daily lives.
However, we may also notice that the aging population may also enjoy better living condition than their counterparts in the past. To begin with, the medical advances greatly prolong people’s life span. Some common diseases like diabetes and hypertension now are no longer serious problems since their symptoms are sharply alleviated by intaking useful medicines. Apart from this, if the elderly are not willing to live together with their offspring, nursing homes today also provide much more well-rounded care systems with qualified medical personnel, which brings massive conveniences to their later lives.
As far as I am concerned, the senior citizens today are living a far more comfortable life than few decades ago. And I believe they should hold a positive attitude towards their lives and embrace the changes in this modern world.
相關(guān)詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)
Inevitably 不可避免地
Acquaint 使熟悉
Pervasive 普遍的
Prolong 延長(zhǎng)
Lifespan 壽命
Alleviate 減緩
Offspring 后代
Personnel 人員
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